Wednesday, March 30, 2011

Daily Journal

 The clock winked and I realized that I was not close to being done with the test that was given to me right in front of my eyes. So all I had to do was to think quickly or just to guess and hope to God for the best. The teacher realized what I was doing and he was on his way to my desk. I was getting worried and al of a sudden my worst nightmare came. The bell ranged and that meant the school day was over and that I had to rush with the answers. I put the best answers that might look right to the teacher. Until I looked up and I saw that he was very upset with me and that I had to give it to him. But instead of leaving with the paper, he wanted to grade in front of me. After a moment of weird silence, he looked at me in a very shocking way. He turned the paper back around to me and it says that I had an A on the test. I gave him a big smile and I got all my things together and left to my car. I drove home knowing that I was one lucky person that had the good things coming to me.

Monday, March 28, 2011

Daily Journal

I am taking a shower in the dishwasher because i have been used and put into a lot of people's mouths. No wonder how many jerms I have on me. Ugh ! But I can't complain becase I am getting super cleaned by the dishwasher. A lot of soap, water, and heat in here makes me suffocate so much and I need some cool air to come in. Someone please open the door or I'm going to die.

Friday, March 18, 2011

Daily Journal

If you could invent one thing to help mankind, what would it be?
That people should all do the same amount of work as others and that we should all get the same treatment even though we are all diferent classes and other things. That we should be more repsonsible for our actions and not blame others for them. Love one another and not have hatred get in the way of another person because then more people would have more hatred.

Thursday, March 17, 2011

Elements For Science Fiction Story

Setting:
- Place: San Francisco, California
- Time: Evening, probably 1:30pm, July 7, 2111
- Weather Conditions: Sunny (no clouds in the sky)
- Social Conditions: Too much people doing sin in their daily lives when Christians are trying to get sould born into Jesus Christ.
- Mood or Atmosphere: People are scared because they know that God has had enough and that he is coming soon.
Conflict:
- External: I am struggling with why people are doing wrong when the signs from Heaven is very visible and clear that he is coming.
- Man vs. Society: We as christians are trying to have people turn their life over to God so he can have more souls go to Heaven and people are paying attention or they don't care. They don't want to be controllled by what we think is best but instead live their lives the way they want to.
Characters:
- Jessica Jones (me)
- Mr. Fibbs (World Diagramer Worker)
- God
- Devil
- Spirits
- Citizens
- Allen Smith (Scientist)
Plot:
- Introduction: People are trying to get people to join Christ.
- Rising Action: The Devil is trying to get Christians to sin, and God and his angels is trying to get sinners to join Christ and to guide them through it all before it's too late.
- Climax: They are seeing signs from Heaven that time is about to run out before he comes.
- Falling Action: At Jessica's job, they see what is going on in other parts of the world.
- Denoucement: The earth is fit to be destroyed and some rise up to heaven while some stay on earth getting destroyed with the Earth itself.
Point Of View:
- Some is followed through the Stream of Consciousness because the author is trying to have the reader make the story seem real like it's really happening to them in their head or just imagining.
- But most of the story is viewed in First Person because of the author being in the story as well.
Theme:
- It mostly shows you that we are living in the last days and not everyone will make it to Heaven. God is coming soon and we can't underestimate him or the what the word says in the bible. It also tells us that we should be living for the Lord and to not let the enemy which is the Devil, to bring us down and have us get back to sinning because then the Devil will have us for good. One last thing to learn from this story is to never wait to the last minute to join Christ because, you should be ready in advance for what's about to happen and know what to expect and just have faith when God comes to get his people.

Daily Journal

I once dreamed about... a lot of crazy things that I think would happen or just wouldn't happen because they were made up. It would be things like a killer chasing me and my family in cities that I've been to or never been to. Someone that wanted me to do a task in order to get something back. Maybe I would fight with someone and just things like that. I be even deaming about people dying and I would become depressed for so long. Even my true love coming and finding me after all :). Or it would be kidnapping or sometimes love and romance with someone I like and just things like that. I don't really want to get into detail because it's embaressing.

Wednesday, March 16, 2011

Daily Journal

I wish someone had told me... About a girl that was suppose to be my best friend talking mess about me. When I have been nothing but good to her and I have even lost friends just by sticking up for her. I wish someone would have told me the things she has been saying about me before I beated her up in her cousin's basement. But everyone told me afterwards like some cowards and that pist me off. I wish someone would have told me that Amanda's number was going to get pulled in '09 so I would have been able to talk to her and hang out with her more as a sister. I wish someone would have told me about that people will make things such as high school make them. I wish someone told me more understandable things about true love so I won't be desperate for a man that might not even love me like I love him. I wish someone had told me why people like me don't have as much friends like people that are backstabbers, haters, people that use the easy way out, etc.

Tuesday, March 15, 2011

Science Fiction Brainstorming

I believe i am going to talk about the worls coming to an end. I love science fiction but I am not a big fan of it and I don't mind writing my stories that are in the type of genre. So I think this would be a fun way to write different and cool genres of short stories like Science Fiction. Some examples I am trying to use for my title:
-          The Day The World Died
-          The Day The World Stopped
-          The Day The World Came To An End
-          The Day The World Made Everyone Feel The Same
-          Judgment Day
-          The Last 7(Seven) Days
-          B.R.A.V.E.
It would be either dealing with nuclear war or just God coming on earth because the world wasn't going to last and it would get destroyed. So I just have to figure out what is going to happen before I writie it but I am excited to start writing Science Fiction sotry tomorrow ! :)

Daily Journal

People walking down the street staring at something that was unfamiliar. It was guy driving in a shoe and having fun with it.
"Hey young man! What are you doing?"
"Testing my new invention!"
He kept on driving in the street and some were impressed and others thought he was crazy but he was happy with himself for making the invention.
All of sudden he was driving so fast that the shoe car got out of control and he was getting scared. Then he swurved left and crashed into a truck. Which had damaged the shoe invention and he got upset and ran away.

Monday, March 14, 2011

Daily Journal: "My Journey on a Pirate Ship"

I wake up into a cold breeze late inthe night as I try to see where I have ended up. I get confused and then i see nothing but pirates on the ship talking, drinking, laughing, partying, dancing and fighting. They see that I am a stranger but I am one of them because I am a female pirate but they think that I am a traiter. As I get chased around the ship by a big group of pirates, I try to hide but then I am in a dead end corner of death. All of a sudden I feel a sharp pain to my stomach and I see tha I got stabbed by a sharp knife and blood comes out. I slowly fall down to my knees to feel my last breath leave my body. Then I lay in front of them dead as a corpse.

Thursday, March 10, 2011

Daily Journal

A old man name John works at home doing work in the farm. He was growing carrots, so that way it can help his wife make carrot cake. It was early in the morning a while before the sun was fully up in the sky and he got up and got himself ready for some yard work. Today was the day that he had to get all the carrots for his wife big dinner and when he went out to grab them for her, some have been eaten. He tried to see what the problem is and then he finds out that it was rabbits that has been eating them and he saw one that was hiding in the cabbages. He didn't know how he caught the rabbit but he did and he grabbed it by the ears and brought it back to the house and made it as his pet.

Wednesday, March 9, 2011

Daily Journal

Scooby Doo loves his scooby snacks. it makes him stronger in order for him to defeat the monsters that try to attack him and his friends. Scooby loves to solve mysteries and he is very passionate in what he likes to do. Shaggy and Scooby are the best of friends and they love to eat everything that looks good to them. But at the same time, Scooby loves to get attention from the gang that he hangs out with and he doesn't regret one bit. Without his scooby snacks, he would not be the best dog in the world that everyone loves like I do.

Tuesday, March 8, 2011

Daily Journal

Close to the edge of death as I'm seeing my afterlife flashing in my eyes. Should I jump towards suicide? Or should I wait 'til death comes to me. Looks like it has come and here I come to Heaven.

Monday, March 7, 2011

Daily Journal

Marian Bartsch and Joey Catsalgi met on his first day of work... They bumped into each other by accident trying to get a cup of coffee in the break room. Until, Marian and Joey couldn't stop looking at each other and they knew that it was emant for them to be where they are now.
"Hi." Marian said to Joey as she gets nervous by looking at him.
"Hi." Joey responds checking her out but then turning away to take a sip of his coffee.
They looked back at each other with a smile but they were both too nervous to say something.
"Have I seen you before?"
"I believe so, but I don't remember where."
"Remember the last thing we said to each other?"
Joey starts to laugh a little and so does Marian.
"Yeah I remember. You said that if we meet again it was meant to be but if we don't then God has better plans for us. But I was trying to tell you that this is the plan God had for us."
"I guess you proved me wrong."
"I'm glad I did."
"So,"
"So,"
"You want to sit down and talk for a few mintues before our break is over?"
"I would love to."
They both sat down at a table and it was silence for a mintue but then Joey started the conversation.
"What's your name?"
"Marian Bartsch, and you?"
"Joey Catsalgi. Nice to meet you."
They both shook hands.
"Tell me about your childhood, if you don't mind."
"You first."
"No you first. Please?" Mirian gave him a sad face and it made him laugh a little and he gave up.
"Okay then I will."
"My childhood was good, if I should say. I have three brothers and four sisters and I am the second youngest in the family. My mom died of cancer when I was 18 and my dad died of a massive heart attack when I was 12. But I have been trying to give my life to God so I can understand things like this."
"My life wasn't really good, I'm even surprised that I got this job to begin with. I am the only child and I never had a good life. My mom has been in and out of my life and my dad had died when I was 3. He was killed in a gang shooting and I really haven't had a good relationship with him either. I have been abused by him for a couple of years and it started when I was in my mom's stomach. He use to beat on her and when I born I had bruises on my body and then my mom started to do the same. We haven't heard from each other since and I always tried to reach out to her. But she always turn me down and no, I have not reached out to her anymore and I'm not willing to."
"Sometimes you're going to have to do that even when times are rough. Things are really going to go in rollercoasters and you're going to have to be happy when we go through struggles."
"I know you're right, you've been correct about everything so far."

Friday, March 4, 2011

Change Poem # 2 (Final Poems Project)

God

He
Is
Coming
Soon
And
We
Need
To
Be
Living
For
The
Lord
Or
Else
We
Would
End
Up
Somewhere
For
Eternity
That
We
Would
Not
Want
To
Be
At
Or
You
Can
Decide
To
Go
To
Heaven
With
The
Actions
You
Are
Doing
Now

Daily Journal

This is my last day to die, but I have all the money in the world that I want. What would I do to spend my last day on Earth? I would give money to every country including ours since we are in debt. I would give it to every family that is in need, to the poor people that are trying to make a life for themselves or was willing to give up. I would give it to countries such as Haiti, African and all the continents to share with their people, government , and other things like that. I would build schools, homes, jobs, and tranportations. I would give the money to my family as well since they have been there for me. I would give some money to people that I saw as a friend or a good person to me. I would even give moeny to my haters because I know that they would not expect it from me and they can realize what type of person I really am and how bad they have hurt me. I would give it to my true love Poly because he has never let me down and I know that when I'm gone he will miss me in soul but I am alive in his heart and part of him in his body, and same with mommmy :)

Thursday, March 3, 2011

Villanelle Poetry

Beautiful, What is beautiful to me or what does it means to you?
Has tried to show me the beautiful I am  from people that I love
If someone told you that you was an ugly individual what would you do?

Poly, mom, and everyone else thanks for loving me for me, all of you.
I know God has tried many different ways to have me see it from above.
Beautiful, What is beautiful to me or what it does it mean to you?

10 Most Accomplished Thing In My Life

- Saved a baby from getting hit by a car
- Have made the honor roll
- Sang at a talent show
- Took AP classes in high school.
- Kept a job for a year.
- Still a virgin.
- Mom's golden child :)
- Have not given up in life
- Has not got in no more fights
- Trying to success to leave Minnesota
this is not true list

Wednesday, March 2, 2011

Etheree Poetry

Love
Feels Good
When There Is
A Good Man To
Hold You Down When And
He Does Cares And When You're
 In Need Of Someone Like Him
Him And You Don't Want Him To Leave
Leave Because He Cares About Your Heart
So You Show Him The Same Love To Poly

Daily Journal

How ridiculous I was as a... silly girl when I had laughed at an old lady that "supposedly" gets hurt when a girl's brother that I know had bumped into her by accident. It was because we were black and being loud when there was little kids, and people being goofy. But our manager was being a goofy with Hershal because they were talking abuot having a party with their friends and he said that he wouldn't mind hanging out and having fun with her just laughing with each other. it was weird twist though because we didn't get in trouble for the scene that we had caused at the swimming pool and plus the manager was having a good conversation with Hershal about some party they should go to. But before I left i was so drenched out because I was in the hot sun because I was in the swimming pool most of the time and I felt tired with me having fun in the pool wth my sisters and friends. But I do remember a little girl that was playing in a octopus floaty balloon because she couldn't swim and it was so cute because she was smiling and having a good time with her grandmother.

Tuesday, March 1, 2011

A Name Poem

Antoinette Helena Thomas
Awesome person that will not let a person down
Never judge a person for nothing in the world
Too long for a name and might change it it Beautiful
Open-mided? Not really because I am very quiet
In love with my baby Poly and don't want to let him go.
Not into drama and I don't have friends
Everything is worth your time even if you hate life.
Time after time I wonder, what is my purpose?
Teaching myself everyday what I am capable of.
Ever dreamed of being gone away from the world for a very long time?

Horrible things has happened in my life and I hate it very much
Everybody got to live a dream whether it's worth it or not, big or small
Leaving the past behind and worrying about the future for my life.
Eternal I am proud of what I have in my life and what good things will happen in it
Netta is what I go by but I might change it to something else next year
Akila is what I might need to change it to when I'm done with high school of this year :)

Too much T's in my whole name and i hate it at times.
Heaven is my goal of where I want to end up on Judgement Day
Over the top when it comes to making it in life
Mistakes are a person's enemy but you learn from it.
As long as I worry about myself and important people in my life,  I will be fine
Solo Dolo is what I am and I am proud of it very much.


Daily Journal

I wouldn't change the world because people are in control of themselves and we just have to make sure that ourselves is trying to do better before we change the world to do better.